Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Finished News Story


      
   

 Me and my team's profile story for GT is finished. The story is a Profile Story about Mrs. Lardizabal and why she wanted and started music. The story is also about Mrs. Lardizabal's passion for music. The people who contributed in the story is Timothy Blum, Kynan Ledee, Alaka'i Gonsalves, me, Mary Lardizabal, Haley Gokan, Gavin Acob, and all of 1st and 6th period for chorus. Me and my team chose to do a profile story about Mrs. Lardizabal and her passion for music because Mrs. Lardizabal is one of the teachers that works the hardest and she tries her best to help her chorus and ukulele band to the music festival in Anaheim, California. Mrs. Lardizabal makes all these performances and she also advertise all these different stuff like the color run and the rice festival. That's why we chose to do it about Mrs. Lardizabal.

        To me the final to my project was pretty good and we could of done better because in some of the shots were blurry and could use some work. My teacher told us that we would be doing two more of these projects. So now I'm ready to do another one and I know whats coming at me. The final project was pretty good. We had a couple blurry shots and I think that's a easy fix. Just next time we will remember to focus it all the way.

           In our class, we voted what story had the greatest quality and that was the best. We got 0% (0) students of the class that graded us 1. We got 7% (2) students of the class that graded us 2. We got 56% (15) students of the class that graded us 3. Finally, we got 37% (10) students of the class that graded us 4. People in my class had to vote which one was better and 11% (3) students chose our team. I think that the scores that we got was what I expected. Next time I want to do better because I didn't know what to do and I think I will do it better.